#4

How my final paper looks different from my first draft is that it looks how a paper should look. What I mean by this is that in my first draft my ideas and thoughts were unorganized and did not make sense at times. However, in my final draft, my paper flows more evenly. My major revisions were in sentence structure. This was because, what made sense to me, did not make sense to others. I know that as a writer, i tend to repeat information a lot. Peer review is what helped strengthen my paper the most. the strongest part of my paper is the overall story, it is an interesting and relatable story. The weakest part of my paper would be the sentence structure.